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Post by xeralaversian on Jan 21, 2021 18:06:52 GMT -5
Greetings all! I am trying to form my nation and solidify laws of the land. Can someone take the time to look at my factbooks on healthcare and education and tell me if this is how I’m supposed to do factbooks? I know I keep reminding how new I am and pressure is on since this is a grade research paper. www.nationstates.net/nation=xeralaversian
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Post by kingplatypus on Jan 21, 2021 23:45:09 GMT -5
Wow! This is really cool! You have some really cool and thought-provoking ideas, and they're explained pretty well in context. There are some grammatical errors that might be worth fixing, but the sentiments and ideas come across really nicely!
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Post by xeralaversian on Feb 8, 2021 20:58:14 GMT -5
Wow! This is really cool! You have some really cool and thought-provoking ideas, and they're explained pretty well in context. There are some grammatical errors that might be worth fixing, but the sentiments and ideas come across really nicely! Thanks so much! I will go back and edit if I can but I appreciate you taking time to look!
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